Tuesday, August 26, 2008

Question of Love - Ramya's Response.

ask not who you love or who with you, is in love
think not about the games played by the one above
the best of both worlds I need, I avow
but that, my friend, my two women shall not allow..

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For the short verse i posted y'day, my friend Ramya came up with this brilliant, realistic and hence a response loaded with sarcasm. Tho a bit skewed cause i never said the love was a man's love for a woman (or a man!) and vice-versa. So here is what Ramya says. And believe me, she came up with this by the time i was back from a coffee break! :-)

4 comments:

kau kau goes the crow said...

Whats happening to techies that they respond now with verses...from writing extremely long codes to very short prose..wouldnt get into the content at all. Its classically open for interpretaion..

Anyways a new side of Nilesh that i get to see and i like it ;-)

Kaustubh

Nilesh said...

Thanks! But this is a side that thankfully doesn't surface often. And prose is just like code. You don't really get it right often! :) Didn't know you were on to blogging. Nice..let me go see what you write about.

kau kau goes the crow said...

My posts dont end..to put it in shuddha prose " History would never accuse me of being a man of few words "

But yes if u do manage to read it and come to the end of one..u may comment..need all feedback from veterans like u

Nilesh said...

Kau - Yeh right! Veterans!! Pluheez! Rest on your own page now. :)